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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Sharp (03/07/13)

TITLE: Heart Surgery
By vincent lyons
03/11/13


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Who can know where soul meets spirit?
Who can prise these two apart?
Realm beyond our wisdomís limit
Area no man can chart
Where hides the secrets of the heart.

There, can lurk much pain and sorrow
Fount where thought originates
Deeper far than bone and marrow
Home to unseen hurts and hates
Where sin and trouble incubates.

Man can offer no solution,
Band-aid remedies at best;
Methods based on Truthís dilution
Where manís sin is not addressed
Can never heal the heart oppressed.

Word of God so sharp, incisive
Pierces where dark things may hide
Spiritís Truth so firm, decisive
To the seeking heart applied
Twixt soul and spirit will divide.

Two-edged sword with skilled incision
Cuts to quick where sin infects
Lifts the veil with deft precision,
Source of problem it detects
The power of darkness disconnects.

Quick and powírful, sharp and pointed
Word discerns the hearts intentó
Spiritís scalpel, pure, anointed
Will not fail or circumventó
His lone prescription isórepent!

Glad I am that Heavenís Surgeon
Plied His scalpel to my soul
Excised every sinful burden
Injected life and made me wholeó
Now bless the Lord my joyful soul!


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 03/14/13
This is such a powerful poem. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture with your words as they flow effortlessly off the page.
Camille (C D) Swanson 03/14/13
Oh, this was so precious. Thank you. God bless~
Ellen Carr 03/15/13
This is a lovely poem in its message, its rhythm and rhyme and its use of words. I especially like these lines:
'Glad I am that Heavenís Surgeon
Plied His scalpel to my soul'.
Well done!
Jack Taylor 03/16/13
Clear and pointed power in this picture of the Spirit's sword. Thanks for this submission.
Fiona Stevenson03/17/13
Excellent. God bless you.
Judith Gayle Smith03/20/13
Wonderful. This is beautiful in flow and thought . . .
Christina Banks 03/21/13
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place. Congratulations!
Wilma Schlegel 03/21/13
This is eloquent. It is a balm for the soul.
Lillian Rhoades 03/21/13
Rhyme and rhythm great, but substance far greater.

"Who can know where soul meets spirit? Who can prise these two apart?"

Mmm,Mmm,Mmm, deliciously poetic.:-) Congratulations for your first place win!!
A B03/21/13
Beautiful. Congratulations on your ribbon.
Bea Edwards 03/21/13
Congratulations on winning with this potent dose of reality.
Beautifully written; it flows like cleansing water.
Margaret Kearley 03/21/13
Wow Vincent - thank you for this wonderful and powerful poem. Every verse has a line in it that 'cuts' straight through to the heart with recognition and truth. I love particularly your penultumate verse - 'His anointed scalpel' - wonderful! You brought us all to rejoice with you in the last verse to bless the Lord with joyful souls. Thank you again. Many congratulations on your more than well deserved first place.
Alicia Renkema03/21/13
Your poem is actually a picture of poetry in surgical- motion, every stanza dove tails into the next so precisely and beautifully. I love how you talk about God's word... Your stanza's are like poems in and of themselves and yet all together they build a a luscious cake for the eating with the pice de resistance at the end as the frosting. The joy-filled life you have with the Lord because of the precision work He has done in you brings this poem full circle as you are now giving your life as a gift back to Him. Wonderful writing, such a pleasure to read. Congratulations on this treasure.
Cheryl Harrison 03/21/13
"Glad I am that Heavenís Surgeon
Plied His scalpel to my soul
Excised every sinful burden
Injected life and made me wholeó
Now bless the Lord my joyful soul!"

I so enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on your 1st place level win and your 1st place EC. Well deserved. Keep writing.
Ellen Carr 03/22/13
Congratulations Vincent on your 1st place in Masters and in EC. Both are well deserved!
Linda Goergen03/22/13
Congratulations on your well deserved win! Masterfully worded poem gives awesome vision of God's word at work on sin!
Beth LaBuff 03/22/13
I agree with previous comments, this is masterful. Your writing is wonderful is every aspect. Super congrats on your top placing with this.
Danielle King 03/23/13
Skilled and powerful poetry. No wonder you took first place. Congratulations.
Bonnie Bowden 03/24/13
Congratulations on your 1st place EC. Nobody can pen poetry like you.