The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/13
I forgot I was reading...I was there! You managed to give us backstory, details, and character in so few words. I wonder if this is a teaser for a future novel. I hope so!
02/17/13
Who doesn't enjoy a mystery? The way you integrated the characters in way that made us feel we were actually on the crime scene.

I hope the next topic will allow you to make this piece into a sequel.

I would like to guess who the gingerbread is.
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall!
02/22/13
Have to agree with Catrina, there's a whole novel waiting in the wings. Tragic scenario, but well-written.
Wow you packed so much into this story. I felt like I was washing Criminal Minds or another cop TV show. I really liked this and want to know read more.