The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent. I loved the title, and the delightful twist at the end gave a fitting conclusion to a highly creative story.
Fun, delightful, and very well-crafted. Enjoyed this so much!
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall!
You know I love Lemondrop, and was disapointed when you spilled the beans about him being a story character! Well written. Keep Writing!
I liked it, but there is not much I do not like when reading your stories. The only thing better would be listening to the story as you tell it. : )
Ok, we've created a monster here! Samantha wants me to keep reading your stories. I want to knit! Oh well, you've got us hooked! On to another...this one is very good by the way! Brilliant again!