The Official Writing Challenge
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The title conveys intrigue and the story did not disappoint. I thoroughly enjoyed the suspense and the message.
Well written and an excellent story. Good job!
02/19/13
What a delightful snippet of life that really tells everything. I loved it. But one thing confused me. At first he was Johnny's junior high Sunday School teacher. Then he was his fourth grade teacher. Was that intentional?
02/21/13
Congrats. God bless~
02/22/13
Heart-warming and salutary at the same time. Loved that bridge to today's fourth-grade class which closes your story. Congratulations on your HC.
02/24/13
Oh this was simply priceless-pun intended. Well written, convincing and convicting!