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02/08/13
I thought we might have been treated to some privacy here, but urine-atural bladdermouth!
But seriously, within the tension you've expressed a healthy dose of self-deprecating humour in your faith.
Very enjoyable read.
02/09/13
I’ve always said good nurses are “earth” angels, so a real angel posing as an “earth” angel doesn’t seem so far-fetched. This was a humorous and very entertaining read!
02/11/13
Hysterical! What a tribute to nurses! Loved this . . .
02/11/13
Giggles over Noel's comment!
02/11/13
Very well written! I enjoyed it!
02/11/13
Comical tribute to health care workers usually under staffed and underpaid! Been there and done that and am all to familiar with those copious fluids coming from numerous angles...
02/12/13
Your wonderful story gave me even greater appreciation for nurse-angels!
02/13/13
My Mom was an old RN who worked my night shifts and extra shifts. This reminded me of some of her stories. Except for the wonderful "Angel." Thank you for a heartwarming read.

God bless.
02/13/13
Loved this! You did a wonderful job with this entire read, and right on topic as well.

God bless~
02/13/13
Loved the inner dialogue the MC had going with herself... (from your throwing a brick comment) -- I thought this was a very original and clever piece of writing. Also, loved the ending, the very familiar and casual way the MC had with the God she served. Well done.
02/14/13
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall!
02/19/13
You did a great job of putting the reader right in the middle of the situation with its urgency. What an amazing story, too, wow! I was captivated.