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01/20/13
Despite the exploitation that throbs through this piece, you evoke a deep confidence in God's justice with real credibility.
01/21/13
With so much injustice in our cursed world, I long (like Abraham) for a city whose builder and maker is God. You've created a beautiful (and powerful) poem making the yearning for justice tangible. Excellent work!
01/22/13
Nicely done! God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 26 overall!