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01/18/13
This is a very moving piece of writing and, assuming that this applies to you, the author, and your life situation I pray that indeed you will be assured of God's 'love ...without measure or end!' as you so beautifully put it.
01/18/13
Powerful poem. I keep praying for our nation, too! (Although, I am not sure you are from the US).
01/20/13
You have packed alot of feeling into this psalm-like entry and, like a psalm, it lifts the reader towards hope in God's value and judgement. Well done.
01/22/13
Simply powerful! I love the book of Psalms...David's cries to the Lord. The intense emotions and the heartfelt plea to God is moving.

I heard the voice of pain and torment in this piece, and then the tranquility that can only come from trusting in God. Great job.

God bless you abundantly~
01/24/13
I have so many of the same thoughts and feelings and the same hopelessness concerning our country. I love where you take the reader in your ending stanza, to triumph and to faith. This is poignant and powerful. Thanks.
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall!