The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyable and nicely paced. Clever title. Well done.
So real. And so well told.
It took me a minute to figure out what in the world Julia was talking about, too, so I don't blame the dad. But clever way to talk about it subtly. Cute story!
Haha..I'll admit, I caught the meaning right away (because...ahem...I was a surfboard in junior high, too :-))

Clever entry completely on topic.
This is a cute story and I've been educated in girlie terminology. Spot on topic in a subtle way. Loved it.
Great title! And a girly topic of significance to girls of that age. Well done.
Your story expresses tenderness and a wonderful knowledge of growing up. I really love the title.
I enjoyed this story from the start to the very last word. Great story.

God bless~