The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked it! Raising four boys, I know the beating walls take. The only sentence that wasn't quite clear to me was the one about the babysitters. "I don't think the babysitters stopped for about..." Stopped what?
01/12/13
I enjoyed your story, told by the flat. It worked well. Well done.
01/15/13
Cute and endearing tale. I enjoyed and appreciated it very much. Thanks.

God bless~
Oh this is a delightful read. I think you handled the topic in a brilliant way, not only did you call the apartment a flat but the MC is flat too! Loved it! Congratulations on ranking 8 in Masters and 11 overall. (So close!)