The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/13
I enjoyed your story. I like all the references to Allison and what she says, and how she turns out to be the MC's daughter. I can imagine this as part of a bigger story. Well done.
01/15/13
Oh, I really enjoyed this entry so much. The dialogue, the meaning between the lines, and the overall writing style.

Thanks. God bless~
Congratulations on first place in EC for your story that moves along just right to touch the reader.
01/17/13
FLAT is a. Eautiful story. Congratulations on your win!
01/17/13
Good story, well written. Congratulations!
01/17/13
Congratulations Michael. This is great writing.
01/17/13
Congratulations, Michael. I love your writing. It's good to be back to FW.
01/17/13
Awesome entry! Congrats, Michael! Well done. God bless!
01/18/13
Congratulations on your winning entry. It was the second time reading it through that your masterful tale was revealed while savoring your words-well done!