The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/13
Hauntingly beautiful. Your poem really spoke to me. I confess that I will have to look up the word diaphanous to glean its meaning.
01/17/13
I could see this, beyond the porch rail, the mist shrouding the countryside. I thought your tangible images gorgeous, and the deeper meaning portrayed is pure poetry. It's difficult for this sentimental soul to see changes, so this speaks to my heart. This reminds me, too, how we see through a glass darkly now, but someday! :) Beautiful work, friend.
Wow this is such a powerful piece. Your description divine. Congratulations on ranking 10 in Masters and 15 overall!
Loren, what absolutely gorgeous description this piece has, so deep with meaning as well. The last line is one of those perfect lines!