The Official Writing Challenge
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A good read, though it seemed a bit disjointed at first--going from dad in hospistal to your upcoming surgery to a friend's suicide to a horses injury...I guess you were portraying the way life is sometimes! Liked the ending.
01/12/13
This evoked such powerful emotions. You did a good job portraying the mountains and valleys in life. This really touched me. Good job! God bless!
01/12/13
This is a confronting and moving piece of writing and about difficult things. The ending draws it to a positive close. Well written.
01/14/13
So moving and so powerful and gripping. Loved this entire entry from the first sentence to the very last.

Thanks. God bless~