The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/13
Fantastic fun to read. Made me remember all my own shoes, beginning with sturdy Buster Browns (while all the other girls got to wear cute pink shoes with bows).
01/12/13
Oh, my! How I loved this! Adorable, made me giggle! Good job! God bless!
01/12/13
This is a great story. I love the shoes theme. I don't know if flat soled shoes are called 'flatties' where you live but they could have been an worthy footwear choice at the end of the story. Most enjoyable.
01/14/13
Absolutely love this story! Laugh out loud funny and very clever take on the topic.

The only thing I might change is the title. I thought perhaps the "bad grammar" was on purpose because of the voice of the main character, but she was pretty grammatically correct throughout. :-) But that has nothing to do with the story itself, which is fabulous!
01/14/13
Hahahahahahaha! This was so entertaining and so well written. I laughed out loud and will be smiling for some time to come.

Thanks. God bless~
01/16/13
I loved the title and the humor in your story.
01/17/13
I imagine that, as a man, a lot of the humor of this piece was lost on me. Nonetheless, enough of it came through to make this a completely entertaining read for me. Congratulations on your EC award and for such a great piece of writing.

Thanks!
01/19/13
HeHeHe good one for all of us shoe mavens!