The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story, well written. I was going to research to see if McDonalds were around in 1959, but since you said the story was based on actual events, I am sure you know!
I wish I had actually written down all my stories when I was that age, instead of just telling them in my head. Hope you still have a few of those saved. I like the different ways you worked "flat" naturally in, and all the ways the girl used her stories to help her cope with the difficult situation.
01/12/13
I enjoyed your story and how Lyla was able to escape into writing stories and imagining herself in them. Well done.
01/14/13
Nicely told and so enjoyable. I really loved this whole entry so much.

Thanks. God bless~
Loved this story! No wonder you have so many books going at once. Stories just pour out of you. God has blessed you with a great imagination. Keep Writing!