The Official Writing Challenge
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This is just lovely. You grabbed me with your questions and you made the rhythm flow like music. It may have been a tad weak on topic, though you did mention the word once. But then again Jesus clothes us in His love every day so I can see it both ways. This line really touched my heart and I can totally relate: dare I begin to hope again? Well done.
11/15/12
I enjoyed this. Good job! Thank you.
Well written. Congratulations!
11/15/12
Margaret, first I want to say your meter and phrases are masterful, and second, Your message is the crowning triumph. I LOVE the questions, then the answer! Super congrats on your Editor's Choice award! Wow!
11/15/12
Margaret, this is such a lovely, well-written poem with an awesome message! CONGRATULATIONS on on your E.C. win! WAY TO WRITE!! :D
11/15/12
I really enjoyed the way you wove your questions steering your reader to the most amazing of answers!
11/15/12
Congratulations on your EC. Great job.
11/16/12
This is a beautiful and moving poem. Congratulations on your EC placing and HC. This is a poem I will want to read again and again.