The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this piece. I could totally relate to the MC. This year, especially I noticed the colors on the trees. I don't think I've ever seen so many hues from red to purple and orange. it was beautiful. Good job.
11/08/12
I am a person who LOVES color, so I could really appreciate your piece! You had some nicely descriptive phrases, such as "Mums stand shoulder to shoulder like mounded jewels." I also liked the line, "I opened God's closet and saw October hanging there."
11/15/12
CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win, Laura! WAY TO WRITE! :D Rereading it a second time, I appreciate your lovely color pictures even more, and that last line is very, very perfect!! :)
11/15/12
Congratulations Laura. This is a wonderful poem.
11/15/12
Stunning devotion to God's Majesty. His gift for our eyes only. Colors so magnificent we can only be in awe of our Creator. Thank you for this beautiful piece!
11/15/12
This is just beautiful. I love the contrasts and the words 'I open God’s closet
To view October hanging there,' is just a perfect opening to your descriptions of Autumn. Great ending too. Many congratulations.