The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/12
You've had some fun with this one. I almost pictured Maxwell's Silver Hammer: "PC 31 says 'We caught a dirty one'..." but then you weren't dirty; but clean! I hope they didn't put you in solo-tary confinement;-)
I like it! Sounds like it would be fun to read aloud, kind of like Dr. Suess!
Wow what a powerful piece. I am in awe of your talent. Each word, much like a jigsaw puzzle, fits perfectly like it was designed for that line and that line alone. You gave me goosebumps with this one.