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This is a sweet story. Memories are funny things in so many ways. The years can change them as well as the storyteller helping it become a more exciting story year after year. I think that's part of the reason I was attracted to this piece, not only do memories change, but places do as well, but if we look hard enough there is one constant that remains--Jesus. I see this as an allegory about a mother and her kids searching and in the end finding out what matters most.
11/07/12
You are a wordsmith extraordinaire! The pictures you create with words are stunning to say the least. It's as if you drain each word of every precious descriptive essence.
Amazing and beautiful thank you.