The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. I liked the double meaning to the title, transformation of the old man's life and transformation of the dilapidated property. Seemed like there was a few too many characters to keep track of: Clarence, Martyn, Doug, Jack and a few more. I find it distracting to a story if I have to stop and figure out who everyone is. Maybe that is just a problem with my easily distracted mind!
11/07/12
I too like the symbolism of transformation here and find it refreshing to read the story of the old man who desired to pay it forward.