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10/25/12
Hahhahaha. Great fun story. I felt as if I was sitting there having tea too! I was a little upset at the father and daughter laughing, but smiled after learning it was the cup that was causing the dribbling. Thanks.

God bless~
10/25/12
I just loved the story. Great ending. Even the fact that we can be tempted to laugh at someone 'different' was faced. Great work.
You did a wonderful job with this piece. I chuckle throughout and had some vision sketches in my mind's eye. :) I thought for sure the dribbling was going to be indicative of a stroke but I liked where you took me instead. This is a delightful read.
10/29/12
Very funny story. I felt so sorry for Marge, but in the end at least she had a laugh too. Great job.

God bless!
Congratulations for ranking 19th overall!
11/05/12
What a crackup - or should tha be cracked cup?
Loved the natural characters and the way they interact, and the vivid decriptions. Well done.