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10/25/12
Great message and great entry. I enjoyed this meaningful story. Thanks!
God bless~
10/26/12
I enjoyed your story - emotions displaye, suspense, a happy resolution. Thanks.
10/26/12
displayed - it should have said 'displayed' in the above comment.
10/27/12
This was a great story. I think we can all relate to the MC in one way or another. Though I could see the ending coming I was still eager to keep reading. At one point when the MC grumbled about the cups being on the wrong shelf, I thought Tah at least that husband puts the cups in the dishwasher! I guess I have some more self-awareness to do:) Thanks for the story and the look into my heart and of course for the smile.
10/29/12
I could identify with the MC for sure. Often we think we know what is going on but we don't, and are quick to assume that our husband/boyfriend is cheating, or that they have forgotten our important day. Thanks for such a wonderful read and a great lesson.

God bless!
10/30/12
Your story reminded me of times I've felt forgotten, and though they didn't always end in good surprises.I need to be thankful all the time for the many blessings I have
10/31/12
Good story. I've often kept running forward when I knew I should stop. Your MC and your story is very believable.
11/01/12
A very good encounter with truth as the MC came to realize the truth of the situation. It was a well told story, building up to jealousy and suspicion. The surprise ending was great.