The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 354 times
Member Comments
I enjoyed the dialog; the ending gave a satisfactory conclusion and made this an enjoyable read.
This is a fascinating story. It's interesting to see the different views and I think each point does have relevance. Even the church elder's--life is hard and while it is still filled with thousands of blessings each day when we get to Heaven we'll really understand what blessed means. Good job.
Some great truths here, with very good points. I enjoyed the dialogue and different views with a satisfying conclusion. Good writing.