The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the dialog; the ending gave a satisfactory conclusion and made this an enjoyable read.
This is a fascinating story. It's interesting to see the different views and I think each point does have relevance. Even the church elder's--life is hard and while it is still filled with thousands of blessings each day when we get to Heaven we'll really understand what blessed means. Good job.
10/21/12
Some great truths here, with very good points. I enjoyed the dialogue and different views with a satisfying conclusion. Good writing.