The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/12
A thought provoking piece. It's hard to feel blessed when going through discipline, but blessed, nevertheless. Good job.
This is such a lovely piece. You told a beautiful story all while rhyming and flowing You made it look easy and I know it's anything but. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivering an important message.
10/19/12
I enjoyed this very much. It is probably indicative of more people than we can imagine. It is down to earth, real, and beautifully expressed.
You've done a good job of showing through your poem how God is with us in every circumstance, and therein is blessing.
Congratulations in placing 18 overall!