The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/12
This is such a natural expression of the fresh innocence of life, an anointing smile from God, who has a great sense of humour.
10/12/12
Beautiful job, and I know that God laughs and has a great sense of humor for sure.

God bless~
This is a "happy" poem. I love it.
This is beautiful. You did an exquisite job with the rhyme and the meter. It flowed effortlessly. I also so believe that God has a delightful sense of humor and a deep belly laugh.
10/15/12
I love your poem. God,I'm sure, does have a sense of humour and fun. I'm sure he likes to see us laugh and enjoy life.
10/16/12
I like it! I like the variety of "life" you describe here and I can "see" each scene as you describe it, even in just a few words. Well done.
10/17/12
A good reminder that the Lord takes pleasure in the world of his children :).

God bless!
10/18/12
What a great variety of examples Jim! Well done.
10/18/12
I have simply missed hearing your voice, Jim. So distinct & unique, excellent in every way.Puts a smile on my face!
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 4 and 13 overall!