The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story--creative, funny, delightful. I could visualize the whole event.
10/11/12
Very descriptive and restrained commentary on something so visual. Poor Colleen, to be "caught underwears."
The author's somewhat dispassionate tone lent itself to telling this story, a sort of tongue-in-cheek affect. I could picture almost everything as I read also. The pudgy pugs, the haughty bird, poor Colleen. The only thing not really made clear to me is how the door accidentally locked on her.
10/12/12
Great job with this entire entry. I felt as if I were there watching it unfold. Nicely done. God bless~
10/13/12
Pets are so unpredictable. Nice!
10/14/12
What an upsetting introduction to the new day poor Colleen had! I felt badly for her but did enjoy your writing! :)
Have you been spying on me? This was a hoot. I enjoyed every bit and could relate to a lot more than I care to admit. :)
Congratulations for ranking 8th in Masters and placing 11th overall!