The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/12
A thoughtful challenge.
10/12/12
Great job of delivering an important message in a jarring way. Interesing way of presenting the topic...with the opposite effect. A couple of people have done that, this one works so well.

God bless~
10/13/12
Great poetry. This is very encouraging somehow, and a strong reminder of what really matters in these dark days. Good job.
10/13/12
How very true. I love poetry and this poem!
This is a powerful piece. You spoke volumes in such few words. Nicely done.
10/18/12
Enjoyed your poetry. Good lessons within too. Nice job.
10/18/12
One phrase really stood out to me and that was toward the bottom when you said "its funny to those who don;t ask" It is very sad that so many people never ask or invite our Savior into their lives. Thanks for sharing a very thoughtful poem.
Congratulations for ranking 19th overall!