The Official Writing Challenge
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A thoughtful challenge.
Great job of delivering an important message in a jarring way. Interesing way of presenting the topic...with the opposite effect. A couple of people have done that, this one works so well.

God bless~
Great poetry. This is very encouraging somehow, and a strong reminder of what really matters in these dark days. Good job.
How very true. I love poetry and this poem!
This is a powerful piece. You spoke volumes in such few words. Nicely done.
Enjoyed your poetry. Good lessons within too. Nice job.
One phrase really stood out to me and that was toward the bottom when you said "its funny to those who don;t ask" It is very sad that so many people never ask or invite our Savior into their lives. Thanks for sharing a very thoughtful poem.
Congratulations for ranking 19th overall!