The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Great job! I enjoyed this entire piece. And, like the MC - I don't eat pork...but loved the message the piece conveyed.

God bless~
09/14/12
I enjoyed your story. Glad that they had something to eat after all the drama! Thanks.
This is a funny story. I can so relate to many parts. My kids aren't big pork lovers either. Though once I made lion roast and tried to get them to eat that. It was a recipe where both the pork and the beef were cooked in the crockpot. My kids didn't fall for the lion name but it was worth a try! You did a nice job of making the characters feel real. It left me with a warm feeling in my stomach.