The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, sweet, and heartbreakingly tender. Well done.
This was overwhelming and brought a tear to my eye. Wonderful job with this tearjerker. Memories and dreams until "we meet again.

Thank you.

God Bless~
This is really well written with lovely language. And the ending is unexpected but moving. Thank you.
Great descriptions and fun all the way through, but then wow, that ending caught the mood beautifully and tenderly.
Beautiful and stunning piece of work. I never expected the ending which made it all the more poignant. Lovely~ just lovely story!
Nice piece of emotive writing, perfectly coloring each scene that leads to a reflective moment that catches the reader unaware. Great job!
What lovely descriptions of the night and the fish fry! Your characterizations of the couple were simple but effective, as well. But that ending...! What a tender twist! Great job!
Oh this is such a lovely sweet tale. The ending sneaked up on me for sure. That doesn't happen often. I enjoyed this bittersweet tale. Congratulations for ranking 19 overall!