The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Oh my gosh! This gripped my heart and held me captive. It was poignant and jarring at once. I have the utmost respect for the first responders, and the fire department occupies just a "little bit more of my heart" than the others. Many were lost that day, as were innocent civilians...this story is a loving tribute to their memory.

Thank you. God bless~
09/14/12
This is very moving and I like the voice of healing and the way it is dedicated of it to the firefighters. May much more healing take place. Thank you for writing this.
09/16/12
Wow! So glad you're healing from such a tragedy. Your opening line was quite a hook.