The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story--creatively told for What We Do for Love.
09/07/12
I was smiling through the whole story. I love your title!
Priceless. Loved this entry. Wait til you're a grandpa an see what you get served!!
09/10/12
Ewwwwwwww! I wouldn't have wanted to eat that breakfast either! Talk about a sugar high! The little girls were "naturally sweet," though! :) It was a cute story!
This is a hoot. You had me grinning and chuckling from the beginning to the very end. Your descriptions were so perfect. Super dark chocolate milk--I could see the syrup clinging to the glass. It's amazing what we endure for our kids' sake huh? Loved this piece!
09/13/12
Congratulations! Sweet girls, sweet story and strong stomach. You're a hero!
09/13/12
CONGRATULATIONS on our E.C. for this sweet and funny story! Way to write!! :D
09/13/12
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Very cute and cleverly written story. Poor, poor blessed dad :-)
09/13/12
Congrats, Frances. The purple poptart came through for you. I'm still smiling. :)
09/16/12
Congrats Frances. Good job!