The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/12
This was a great read. Your "back door entrance" approach to the topic worked very well. The story was whole story was well done, and enjoyable to read.
09/08/12
Poor Jacob. :) You had me smiling all the way through. Your reverse psychology worked on me. I'm getting a plum for lunch.
Great job. Loved the approach, plot and ending. Very enjoyable read!
Oh this is a grand read. I loved how you masterfully built just the right amount of suspense. You had me holding my breathing, then chuckling, then a sort of sadness settled in as I realized for some this isn't a far-fetched story but more of reality. Awesome writing!
09/11/12
Oh..this is a sad story to me...I can only hope that it never really happens!

Well written and excellent...kept me wanting more.....God Bless
Quite enjoyable! Love how he got "caught" sneaking in with the "bad" stuff.
09/13/12
Yesterday I pulled plums from a tree and bit into one. A grub reared up and looked at me. That cured my plum passion! Superb entry. Loved it! Congratulations.
09/13/12
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations, Myrna, on your Editor's Choice award for this thought-provoking, fun story.
09/13/12
Very, very interesting and entertaining twist!
09/16/12
Congrats Myrna! Good job!