The Official Writing Challenge
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Really excellent poem--Carefully chosen words make great pictures, and at the same time, present a lesson.
I am howling here! I usually pass up poems (my problem - just don't get 'em) but this one grabbed and kept me to the "bitter" end. Great, great job!!!
09/10/12
Wow! This is so creative and fun to read. Many great verses and descriptions all leading to an important truth. Excellent.
09/10/12
Wow! This is so creative and fun to read. Many great verses and descriptions all leading to an important truth. Excellent.
You really painted some fantastic pictures in this thought-provoking poem. Nice job.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in Masters and 12 overall!