The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/12
Great piece of fiction. Layers of meaning seamlessly woven together into a frighteningly realistic tale.

Loved it.
08/31/12
wow - interesting and gripping entry. Nicely done. God bless~
09/02/12
Great writing with a powerful message. A unique entry for the topic.
09/04/12
Wow. This is good. I can only imagine what might be in those "sweets...."
I love this take on the topic. You handled the red district area well and were delicate about the trailer while still making it clear what she was offering. This is a fresh take on the topic and though disturbing to read, life can be disturbing to live at times...unless of course we call on the Great Physician.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in Masters and 12 overall!