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Touching. I enjoyed it very much. Thank. God bless~
I enjoyed this story. There's a great deal of suspense in it and I noticed I was leaning forward, pushing to see what would happen next. This, however, caught me off guard:

"Them pipeline people.."

I didn't understand why Jackson talks like this, when both his parents don't.

At any rate, this is a great short story, with a strong message, showing how revenge is sweeter when left in the hands of God. Great application of theme.
Loved this story! I was so happy to see that vengeance wasn't sought when they had every right to, and God blessed them beyond measure. Great story-telling. God bless!
I really enjoyed this story. It's so different but still touches on the topic in a couple of ways. You had me scratching my head in suspense and smiling at the end. People really do pull together during hard times. It's nice to see that happen. I believe God created empathy for just that purpose.