The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/12
This well written entry touched my heart. Thanks for sharing. God Bless~
09/02/12
So delightful. Thrilled to see it was based on true events. Love the innocence of it.
09/04/12
Great, fun story. I could sense everything, taste, smell, feel, and see it all, the refeshing quench of the popsicle, the tickle of the carbonation, and even the after-sugar-high crash.

And I'm still smiling.
09/05/12
Great descriptions of all the yummy sweetness! And a sweet story, too. I'm wanting some chocolate now... :)
There's something sweet about earning your very own money. I so enjoyed your MC and remember picking strawberries for not much money for all of that bending in the hot sun. It was nice to take this journey back to a simpler time with you.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 15 overall!