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08/24/12
Thank you so much for this. I have to admit I got a bit confused following the story line at first but I was gripped by the line of advice towards the end. 'Don't look into the abyss, many end up falling in, keep your eyes on Jesus.' What a great truth to remember and to cling to. Thank you, a wonderful true story.
08/24/12
Wow this was drama at its finest, and held significant and numerous messages.

Excellent job and so well crafted. Thanks.

God bless~
The fact that this is based on a true story, probably actually stories in every major city, really packs the punch. Tending to the broken can be a dismal job with a great deal of burnout. The superintendents words really resonated with me. It reminds me of what my mom said (at the time it almost bugged me, but now that she is gone, I really appreciate the wisdom in her words) Keep your chin up and your eyes on the Lord.