The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a cute and fun take on the topic. You had me smiling. I know that boys do seem like they have hollow legs and can put away a lot of good. I think every mom has heard the lament There's nothing good to eat.

I did notice a couple of the rhymes (few and array) interrupted the flow of the sentence. It made me pause at the wrong time.

However, with such a delightful poem those little pauses didn't matter too much. I loved the pictures you painted and the rhymes were a delight. I know writing poems isn't easy but you make it look so.
08/24/12
Cute and delightfully cheery poem. Great job with the topic and so creative.

Thanks! God bless~
Congratulations for placing 8th in Masters and 12 overall!