The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this little story very much with its hint of melancholy and it's introduction to a wonderful character. The descriptions are excellent.
08/24/12
An all together well crafted and brilliant entry. Nice job. Thank you. God bless~
This is a lovely romantic tale. I really liked that the MC prayed and how you told that she prayed for the random people around her. Some of the descriptions, though lovely, felt at time overdone for my tastes. I really enjoyed the intimate relationship between the MC and the Lord. It definitely makes a difference in the way one sees the world. Good job.
08/29/12
Lovely, sweet, touching! So many words to describe this story. Excellent writing and an enjoyable read! God bless!
08/30/12
Congratulations on your ribbon Karen. Well deserved.
08/30/12
What a lovely, descriptive story! I could feel the sunshine and see those vine-strewn fields! :) And the ending sentence was perfect!
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR E.C. AND LEVEL WINS!!
08/31/12
Congrats...God Bless~