The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/12
Clever--creative--fun--I like this piece.
08/24/12
Great job! I loved how you pulled this whole thing together. I really enjoyed the dialogue and the way you presented it. Outstanding!

God bless~
08/24/12
Very entertaining and so timely with the recent Olympic games...and nailed the topic big time with this great entry.
08/25/12
This made me chuckle. I am 4 feet ten and three quarter inches. That's short! I've been trying to reach high groceries all my long life. I really identified with your verically challenged characters. This was a fun entry and bang on topic. great job!
08/26/12
Hilarious, Allison!

I admit, even though I'm of "average" height, I've had to reach for plenty of stuff on the top shelf with your methods.

Great piece and directly on topic. I won't say you'll place high, but I'd be surprised if you didn't. ;)
08/26/12
An interesting, unique and fun piece of going for gold in the grocery lifting techniques!
08/26/12
This is so hysterical. Wow! Talk about out of the box! I'd guess you've been watching the Olympics when you came up with this gem. It's a winner in my book. Thanks for the great laugh!
08/26/12
Hee-hee! Very imaginative and fun! :) (I do think you meant "brakes" instead of 'breaks" when referring to the cart, but that is a minor thing.) I really enjoyed this piece!
08/26/12
GREAT! I felt like I was listening to the olympics! Very funny and clever. I loved it.
08/29/12
Still chuckling from this one! Great writing and a fun read! God bless!
08/30/12
Congratulations for ranking 16 overall!