The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this story very much. I loved the characterization and the realistic dialogue.
08/24/12
This piece held an authentic tone throughout, it resonated truth and I loved the entire entry.

Thank you. God bless~
08/24/12
Loved the character you created with Mona, the genuine dialogue with her husband, and that nervous laughhter that saved the day!
08/25/12
What an imaginative story and take on the topic at hand. What a hoot! I thought Mona wasn't going to come up for air as she talked to her husband, Ed. What an excellent story. I loved it!
This is such a great twist on the topic. I totally loved the characters. You did a fantastic job of building them. The opener was a real grabber too. Great job.