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I enjoyed this story very much. I loved the characterization and the realistic dialogue.
This piece held an authentic tone throughout, it resonated truth and I loved the entire entry.

Thank you. God bless~
Loved the character you created with Mona, the genuine dialogue with her husband, and that nervous laughhter that saved the day!
What an imaginative story and take on the topic at hand. What a hoot! I thought Mona wasn't going to come up for air as she talked to her husband, Ed. What an excellent story. I loved it!
This is such a great twist on the topic. I totally loved the characters. You did a fantastic job of building them. The opener was a real grabber too. Great job.