The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. You started off with a good suspense hook. I have read several stories like this lately and it was easy to predict the ending. I think the message is a good one and something we need to be aware of. You covered the topic with this nicely written piece.
12/11/11
Well written and it held my attention throughout. Thanks for posting I really enjoyed it. God Bless you~
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