Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Win A Publishing Package HERE            

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Search Engine (10/06/11)

TITLE: Seeking, Searching
By Ruth Neilson
10/19/11


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

Seeking, searching, anticipating the request
Eagerly Googling and Binging for the next 'big thing'
Available to search any time, day or night, a college student's best friend
References denied, no Wiki for you. You must use only primary sources
Continuing to search, never tiring of its endless tasks
Herding the correct answers to the web page.

Endlessly seeking answers
Never giving up, determined to make the seeker happy.
Gone is the age of the encyclopedias replaced by the
Insensitive coldness that the world embraces
Negating common sense
Edging out the age of hard word leaving only
Self centered age of reasoning.
--
Seeking, searching, and praying
Eagerly awaiting God's holy light
Arriving to penetrate any hidden flaws so that we can
Reflect the Holy one
Constantly wooing, bringing in the
Harvest.

Encouraging others to meet
Needs, serving, and
Giving to others.
Investing the source of Love
Never drawing back, determined to move forward towards
Eternity where the praises never
Stop.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 251 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Camille (C D) Swanson 10/21/11
Interesting and clever way of bringing forth the topic. And, good job of praising God. I liked it. God Bless~
Linda Goergen10/21/11
A double delightful acrostic poem! Love the way you compare the fleshly way of searching for answers to the spiritual way Ė compare a computer search engine with manís internal search engine! The first half searching just to feed manís curiosity, answers and reason given without emotion. The second half, searching to feed our soul, seeking answers that go beyond human reason and fill us with the emotion and truth of Godly love. Wonderful concept, well done! Enjoyed!
Mona Purvis10/22/11
Good message with an interesting format. I wanted the verses to rhyme or be more in sync.

Mona
Melanie Kerr 10/24/11
An interesting poem. I liked the contrasts between the beginning and the end. How easy it is to click buttons and surf through information - someone else having done all the hard work. How much more active to be searching to please God.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 10/26/11
I really enjoyed the contrast. There's a lot of wisdom packed into these lines.
Edmond Ng 10/31/11
Excellent poem comparing the two in showing their vast differences.