The Official Writing Challenge
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The conversation between mother and son seemed so full of warmth and was very easy to enjoy. The twist with the setting at the end really brought the whole story into a new focus. Very enjoyable read!
09/03/11
Very good read...I felt like the characters were in front of me speaking. God Bless~
I liked the way your story unfolded in the conversatione between mother and son. . .(and the name of your MC!)
09/06/11
Wow, I sure never saw the twist at the end coming! Well written and an enjoyable read! God surely can take mistakes and turn them into miracles! Good job on this!
Your use of dialogue was fantastic, I could hear/feel/see the emotions coming from both the mom and her son. I liked, too the way the story unfolded, mid-way the tone changed a bit and I knew you were taking the reader in another direction. Glad I was along for the ride. Congratulations on your EC.
01/20/12
Well written with a solid lesson slipped in for good measure!