The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/11
hahahahaha...Cute story, "grabbed the lays" - sounds familiar! God Bless~
09/06/11
This brought back memories - post baby number two and searching for the flat stomach I had never had in the first place!

I liked this; it made me laugh
09/06/11
haha, loved the little mantras she had for her kids. Excellent writing.
09/06/11
Such a fun, light hearted story - poking fun at the commercials and how gullible we all can be at times! I bet the poor kids were glad to see Shelly’s disillusionment with the infomercials! Enjoyed the read!
All to relatable! Pass me the bag of Lays! :)
09/06/11
Been there, done that. Oh boy, did I ever see myself in this story. I laughed on numerous occasions. Loved the mantras!
This is nice to read. So many people can relate to this, including myself. I liked the line "Grabbed my lays." This is great. I hope to read more of your writing. You remind me of me. Well done.
09/13/11
Absolutely delightful!