The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/11
Heheh I love the last line. I had a feeling it was actually a gift for the older sister, but that didn't keep me from reading to find out if I was right. Good job with this one.
This is a fresh take on an experience common to most of us, either as parents or as erring children. Excellent job telling an amusing story I can well relate to as a reader.
08/29/11
Liked the twist at the end...
08/30/11
This was cute, and I had no idea how it was going to turn out! I am sure we all have our share of Christmas stories... I know I do.
Loved this. God bless~
08/31/11
This was a delighful read and I loved mom's wisdom at fooling her! Good job.
This is a sweet story. The rule at my house was if you peeked, the present was returned! Your idea is great too. Congratulations for ranking 15th in level 4!