The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/11
I like the characters you created. You kept my interest throughout the story. I wanted to hear more. Great job.
This story pulled at my heart. Thank you for a well put together creation!
08/13/11
Great job of conflicting characters here...I enjoyed it all the way through. Nicely done. God Bless~
I'm with Frances, I wanted to know more. Good job.
08/18/11
This is a wonderful moving story. Great writing, very believable, true characters and descriptive setting. Would love to know the conclusion!
Masterful writing! Congraulations on your EC well-deserved win.
08/18/11
WOW. How do you it again and again? This was like reading someone's diary...being right inside their head for every thought. Amazing.

Loved the storyline, the message. Incredible. Congrats on your EC!
08/19/11
This brought tears to my eyes. Tough and touching. Very tough. Very real. Very well done.