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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Crime and Punishment (not about the book) (07/21/11)

TITLE: Room 1297
By Beth Muehlhausen
07/23/11


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Room 1297


Tall, attractive, confused, blinded, schizophrenic - Ruth Ann, Ruth Ann! You were nineteen, withdrawn, insecure, and desperate for love.

The $37.50 you made each week as an insurance typist couldn’t fill the gnawing, consuming void. Life was a bore, so you dreamed of becoming a flashy model with your willowy body and curly brunette hair – but your jittery temperament stood in the way.

What tempted you to fall for Eddie? Lust? Loneliness? Ambition? Escape? Did egocentricity or fear motivate you to adulterate love? Why did you worship him at an altar in the shrine in your room, spend hours gazing at his pictures, and set an empty spot for him at the dinner table? What made you faint into a heap when you finally got close enough to see him face-to-face? How did you become infatuated, and then obsessed, with this all-star major league first baseman and World War II veteran?

There are so many unanswered questions, but the facts remain.

When Eddie’s team stayed in a hotel in 1949, you rented a room there as well, sipped a few drinks, dressed in nice clothes, placed a couple of jeweled combs in your hair, and gave a bellhop $5.00 to deliver a note to Eddie.

“Come to room 1297…we’re not acquainted…I have something extremely important to tell you. I won’t take up much of your time.”

Eddie came, thinking you might know a mutual friend, and you ushered him inside: cold-faced, resolute, and sure of yourself.

He plopped down in an overstuffed chair.

“For two years now, Eddie, you’ve been bothering me. So today I’m going to do something about it. You’re going to die.”

You pulled a loaded .22 caliber gun from the closet, waved it in Eddie’s face, fired a bullet into his chest, and called room service to say, “I just shot a man.”

It was too painful to be attracted to someone who could never be yours. So you decided to get rid of him.

The bullet missed Eddie’s heart, but collapsed one lung and lodged near his spine. He underwent two surgeries, survived, returned to play ball, and was named Associated Press Comeback Player of 1950. When interviewed, Eddie called you a “silly honey” and later a “mad dog that should be taken off the streets.”

But Ruth Ann … Ruth Ann! The legal system turned its back. Didn’t they want to protect society and deter you from other crimes? Didn’t anyone expect retribution or compensation?

Instead, you were declared insane. Insane! Didn’t anyone see that you were an introverted, self-absorbed young woman starved for love? Didn’t anyone realize you were screaming for help?

The authorities placed you in a mental institution where you relished undivided attention and confessed to “having the time of your life.” You were given electric shock treatments for nervousness and tension and released three years later.

Were you rehabilitated? Reformed and educated? Restored? And not incidentally, were you ever punished for your crime of near murder? Didn’t anyone care that someone almost died at your hand?

Upon your release, Eddie dropped the charge of assault with intent to kill. And so, two final questions remain. Did you finally feel loved when Eddie granted your pardon? And why did he give up his own rightful act of justice in order to protect you?

It is too late to know the answers; you both have passed on. And yet this story speaks of deep, soulful things: sin, rebellion, arrogance, and delusion on one hand, and forgiveness, redemption, reconciliation, and hope on the other.

You hurt too much to love. Eddie must have loved too much to hurt you.


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Author’s note: The above story is based on historical fact. Ruth Steinhagen shot Eddie Waitkus in Chicago’s Edgewater Beach Hotel on June 14, 1949.


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Charla Diehl 07/28/11
I could almost hear the clicking of old typewriter keys as the reporter hurried to make a deadline with this commentary. Very interesting read and like how you wrapped this up with your summary sentence.
Jody Day 07/28/11
Good job. Painful to read and a nice take on the subject.
Virgil Youngblood 07/28/11
A captivating read. Well done.
Margaret Kearley 07/29/11
Wow - what a story. I had never heard of this case but your wonderfully descriptive retelling sent me off to Google to discover more! Great writing of such a sad and tragic story. Deep heart seaching comments in your conclusion too.
CD Swanson 07/30/11
I loved the way the story was "reported" in this article. Well scripted, and very easy read, albeit pulled at one's heart strings. Good job!
Sydney Avey08/01/11
Well done! Love the object lesson in the concluding words. Love the light touch on a heavy subject. Great character sketch. Would the news were reported with such amusing grace.
Noel Mitaxa 08/03/11
I'd never heard of this story either, but you tell it with a great mix of analysis and emotion. Loved that last line.
Margaret Kearley 08/04/11
Hey - congrats Beth. Fantastic news and very well deserved.
Benjamin Graber08/04/11
Wow. This was VERY well written. Congratulations on first place! You deserved it!
Catrina Bradley 08/04/11
Congrats! I love the format and voice of this piece. I was totally drawn in. Great job!
Melanie Kerr 08/04/11
A compelling read. Congrats on hitting the top spot.
Lillian Rhoades 08/04/11
Hats Off!
Japhet Mphande08/05/11
Beth, that is a touching story and nice read. I interestingly enjoyed it. Thanks for that.
Betsy Tacchella08/06/11
Great telling of the story, Beth. Leave the reader with much to ponder. Very descriptive.
Sherry Wendling08/06/11
Beth! I'm so delighted to log on and discover your well deserved win! Your powerful report is written with gripping clarity and unshakable impetus--not a word wasted, and a great clincher at the end. Wow.