The Official Writing Challenge
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It is always hard to let go of those who have made such an impression on our own lives.
You paint a vivid depiction of your grandmother, the influence she had on your life, and the inspiration she was to you.

Your final line is very touching too.
"See you later, Grandma."
What a special woman this grandmother must have been! A sweet story. As difficult as it is to say goodbye to someone we love, there is solace in the truth that, as a Believer, we can sincerely say, "See you later."
08/03/11
You present the sense of loss vividly by contrasting the now with the treasured memories, yet the hope at the end puts everything into perspective.