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The loss of a beloved child can certainly expose all of the existing cracks in a marriage.
Is is frequently hard enough at the best of times to hold things together.

You story makes the scenario very real to the reader.
I am so pleased that you closed on a note of hope.
I truly hope the writer did not have to experience this, but sadly, I know it happens. I could feel the pain and despair, which to me means that it was written well. Thank God this couple have a seed of hope.
I loved this story! It's sad, yet hopeful. I could feel what your MC was feeling and really hope things work out for she and Mike. I love how you used the phrase, "generally speaking," at the beginning and then ended with it.