The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
I can feel the "storm." You've aptly described how Satan takes advantage when winds of adversity beset us.
I think you meant to write: "Good versus evil," rather than "Good verse evil."

Great thoughts, and a wonderful reminder of what it takes to weather the storm
07/18/11
Been there so many times. Just when we're ready to give up, it seems, we hear His whispered words. Very encouraging poem.
This poem brings to mind Casting Crowns song, "I will praise You in the Storm." You are right, there is immeasurable peace that comes with hearing His voice in the midst of adversity.
07/18/11
I love your precision in what could easily become a whole mass of convuluted explanations.
You illustrated well all the way through the difference it makes with "feet firm on the rock."